Задание 3, вариант 1 (картинка 2), ответ 1
I’ve chosen photo number two. Here you can see my mum and my sister. They are staying in the airport after the flight from the USA. They are waiting for a taxi to go home. I keep the photo in my album because it reminds me those happy moments…That trip was amazing. I decided to show the picture to you, my friend, because I think you would like this photo like me.
| Объём высказывания | 6 фраз | |
| Аспект 1 Ответ на вопрос, когда и где было сделано фото | Отсутствует ответ, когда и где было сделано фото | Аспект не раскрыт |
| Аспект 2 Ответ на вопрос, кто/что изображено на фото, дан | Here you can see my mum and my sister. | Аспект раскрыт не развёрнуто |
| Аспект 3 Ответ на вопрос, что происходит на фото, дан | They are staying in the airport after the flight from the USA. They are waiting for a taxi to go home. | Аспект раскрыт |
| Аспект 4 Ответ на вопрос, почему автор хранит это фото в альбоме, дан | I keep the photo in my album because it reminds me those happy moments…That trip was amazing. | Аспект раскрыт |
| Аспект 5 Ответ на вопрос, почему автор решил показать это фото другу, дан | I decided to show the picture to you, my friend, because I think you would like this photo like me. | Аспект раскрыт |
| ИТОГОВЫЙ БАЛЛ за РКЗ | 1 балл | Аспект 1 нераскрыт, аспект 2-неразвернут, минимальный объем |
| Наличие вступления и заключения, завершённость высказывания | Отсутствуют | |
| Логичность и использование средств логической связи | Here you can see my mum and my sister. They are staying in the airport after the flight from the USA. They are waiting for a taxi to go home. I keep the photo in my album because it reminds me those happy moments…That trip was amazing. I decided to show the picture to you, my friend, because I think you would like this photo like me. | Средства логической связи используются недостаточно |
| ИТОГОВЫЙ БАЛЛ за ОРГАНИЗАЦИЮ ВЫСКАЗЫВАНИЯ | 1 балл | |
| ЯЗЫКОВОЕ ОФОРМЛЕНИЕ ВЫСКАЗЫВАНИЯ | Here you can see my mum and my sister. They are staying in the airport after the flight from the USA. They are waiting for a taxi to go home. I keep the photo in my album because it reminds me those happy moments…That trip was amazing. I decided to show the picture to you, my friend, because I think you would like this photo like me. | |
| ИТОГОВЫЙ БАЛЛ ЗА ЯЗЫКОВОЕ ОФОРМЛЕНИЕ | 1 балл |
Итоговая оценка - 3 балла
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ЗАДАНИЕ 7. Просмотрите скрипт ответа другого экзаменуемого на задание 3 (см. в задании 6) вариант 1 (картинка 3). Какие ошибки в решении коммуникативной задачи и в организации текста допустил участник ЕГЭ?
Скрипт выполненного задания
I have chosen a photo number three. Last summer holidays were excellent. I took a lot of beautiful photos, and now I want to show you one of them. That’s great! Last August I managed to visit my dear cousin. You know, I remember that moment when I took this photo clearly. In this picture you can see my close relative. His name is John, and he is in his educational institution. You can pay attention to happy expressions of… happy expression of his face. I think his lifelong dream to become a professional cooker. And I am sure he wants to prepare tasty dishes and make people smile … because of it. I keep this photo in my album because it always reminds me about that great moment when I managed to took this picture. And it’s …. this photo always remind…reminds me of happy expression of my cousin’s face. I decided to show this picture to you because I know you have some problems with your mood and I’m sure when you look at this picture you immediately understand that life is brilliant and also you should try to make your dream reality.
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ЗАДАНИЕ 8. Просмотрите скрипт ответа экзаменуемого на задание 3 вариант 1 (картинка 3). Какие лексико-грамматические ошибки допустил участник ЕГЭ?
Скрипт выполненного задания
I have chosen a photo number three. Last summer holidays were excellent. I took a lot of beautiful photos, and now I want to show you one of them. That’s great! Last August I managed to visit my dear cousin. You know, I remember that moment when I took this photo clearly. In this picture you can see my close relative. His name is John, and he is in his educational institution. You can pay attention to happy expressions of… happy expression of his face. I think his lifelong dream to become a professional cooker. And I am sure he wants to prepare tasty dishes and make people smile … because of it. I keep this photo in my album because it always reminds me about that great moment when I managed to took this picture. And it’s …. this photo always remind…reminds me of happy expression of my cousin’s face. I decided to show this picture to you because I know you have some problems with your mood and I’m sure when you look at this picture you immediately understand that life is brilliant and also you should try to make your dream reality.
ЗАДАНИЕ 9. Отредактируйте скрипт так, чтобы учащийся получил максимальную оценку за задание 3.
Задание для учащегося
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(12–15 sentences) . In your talk remember to speak about:
· where and when the photo was taken
· what/who is in the photo
· what is happening
· why you keep the photo in your album
· why you decided to show the picture to your friend
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Photo 1.
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| Photo 3.
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You have to talk continuously, starting with: “I’ve chosen photo number …”
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